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Open Poetry #13

Breathe

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-04-09 03:36 PM

Breathe on my neck
send shivers
down my spine
caress my heart with
your full lips
and tell me how much
you need me
share with me this happy moment
until the sun rises
and steals night away
and you from my arms.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-09 04:00 PM

Those mornings are hard to accept. I enjoyed and related to your poem. Thanks!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-09 04:07 PM

Thank you

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-09 04:07 PM

Thank you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-04-09 04:28 PM

I like this Brad...James

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