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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-04-09 10:46 AM

Luna, thy beauty is fair
Indeed fairer by far
Than for just what thee are
Surely not how bright or rare
Nor thy constant repair

More so than any mortal device
Is the reason I hold thee dear
For thy beauty indisputably clear
Those virtues can be counted thrice
No, something else must suffice

It is not outward appearance descried
Which strengthens thy beauty
To confess this, I feel is my duty
To me thy fairness is found inside
Fair, for how thee make me feel tonight

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-04-09 10:52 AM

This is beautiful and magnetic!

I loved the last few lines...

"It is not outward appearance descried
which strengthens thy beauty
to confess this, I feel is my duty
to me thy fairness is found inside"

Take care,
Melissa~

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-09 10:57 AM

Oh, the pull, the pull
of Luna, consigned
I am
to think in rhyme
when the tug is there
all white,
and solemn, solemn,
is my night...

A keeper!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-04-09 11:32 AM

Hey PK! Sounds like you've fallen under her spell!

I too noticed the moon this weekend...was gorgeous out at the lake, watching her play hide and seek in the clouds...a beauty of a tribute! applause!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-04-09 11:35 AM

what the moon inspires......such beauty here PK....

I like this

SEA

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2001-04-09 11:39 AM

many a romance has blossomed under moonlit night. Very well done

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-04-09 06:49 PM

is not indeed Sir, the moon most fair???

excellent. . .

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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2001-04-09 07:57 PM

Lovely 'old world' feel to this...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-04-09 08:05 PM

PoeticKnight~
I enjoy any mention of the moon in all her beauty ...
I enjoyed this.

~In the
night of soft
fairest light she
sends a glow to all
of us here below
Glowing lovely
Luna~

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2001-04-10 04:08 PM

....to rise once more....
...to greet the heavens...
..to shine, on one..
Luna

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