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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-04-09 08:12 AM

Morning Fog

Silhouettes of trees emerge through early morning mist
Evergreens and hills in silence show they still exist
As haze arises from the creek bed, flowers reappear
No longer am I blinded to the splendors I hold dear

At daybreak nature summons me to step outside to see
What new enchanting wonders it has spread in front of me
At last I spot the serenading warbler in the brush
Green holly tree, the white of birch and feathers of a thrush

A morning fog had shrouded all from dawn’s sweet subtle glows
The stage is lighted with delight, now that the curtain rose

Elizabeth Santos

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

1 posted 2001-04-09 08:23 AM

...the curtain rose...
I like the anticipation of a new day dawning.
Melton

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-09 08:37 AM

"A morning fog had shrouded all from dawn’s sweet subtle glows
The stage is lighted with delight, now that the curtain rose"

Beautiful description ... I could see it, feel it, and hear it all. Wonderfully imagery to greet the dawn of a gorgeous new day! Lovely as always, Liz!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2001-04-09 09:00 AM

Hi Liz,

This is so beautiful and true, I can't wait to go out and see the day begin this way, scanning for some new suprise Mother Nature has blessed me with,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-04-09 09:49 AM

I miss the cool California foggy mornings...feeling the kiss of mist upon my cheek....

loved this!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-04-09 10:43 AM

Elizabeth, this is so descriptive, expressive and full of beautiful imagery. Wonderful!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-04-09 07:04 PM

shhhhhh. . . if you listen. . . you can hear the roses bloom. . .

wonderful Liz. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

furlong
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 129

7 posted 2001-04-10 04:22 PM

Picture perfect Elizabeth

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

8 posted 2001-04-10 04:33 PM

Elizabeth,Very nicely done. Brought me there. The beauty and silence and fog and dawn all there for my delight. Nicely done. Panne

painted lady
Junior Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 48
on the wing or nectaring

9 posted 2001-04-11 12:16 PM

I can see it and feel it, Elizabeth!
Look for "Fog, I Love the Fog" for another view.

pl

And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils. Wm Wordsworth (I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud)

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

10 posted 2001-04-14 10:39 PM

I'd decided earlier (we share the same fog ~G~) I'd try to write a fog inspired poem =

so I had to read this you know = - scratch all prior thought - it's 'back to the drawing boards' - this is beyond, way beyond, use for inspiration - and i'm too humbled now to attempt

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