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Parker
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0 posted 2001-04-09 01:25 AM


Silence (in Rictameter)


Silence
The space between
Is empty of your words
Do we grow apart in this time
I send a wish of great luck for your quest
Keep  your chin up high, don’t give up
I miss your touching gift
Email full of  
silence


James Parker Haley April 9, 2001

[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 04-09-2001).]

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Waseem Cheema
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1 posted 2001-04-09 04:27 AM


.................................................................................................................................................................................... ..................................Complet Silence

I love to nice poetry.

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2 posted 2001-04-09 07:30 AM


Parker~
Very nicely done -
with a little touch of lonely.
~*Marge*~

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2dalimit
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3 posted 2001-04-09 07:46 AM


I like the "anticipation" you have created, as well as the form.
Melton

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Parker~ Hey handsome   .....this is touched with sadness.....but I like it very much......   SEA
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5 posted 2001-04-09 10:25 AM


Parker!
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6 posted 2001-04-09 11:00 AM


I just knew you couldn't resist trying one!     They are fun and easy once you get the hang of it.  

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



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now I think I'm gonna have to try these Rictameters too!!    SEA
Parker
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8 posted 2001-04-09 12:00 PM


Thanks everybody for replying..  

These are fun and easy with tons more room to express yourself.... then haiku.

Parker

Paula Finn
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9 posted 2001-04-09 01:16 PM


Beautifully lonely Parker...

"If you are going to walk on thin ice, you might as well dance!"
-Anonymous

Parker
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10 posted 2001-04-09 08:14 PM


Thank you paula.  

Parker

dgvarner
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11 posted 2001-04-10 12:05 PM


Do we grow apart in this time
------remember me, and i'm not so far away    


I send a wish of great luck for your quest
Keep  your chin up high, don’t give up
--------your good luck wishes, and your encouragement mean the world to me,...thank you with all my heart!..  


I miss your touching gift
--------i miss your voice..i miss the smile you bring to my face..i miss talking to you!


Email full of  
silence
--------listen close and you can hear my voice...    


you still move me....

hugs, g
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[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 04-10-2001).]

hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 2001-04-10 09:11 AM


Ah Parker...I can't imagine anyone writing emials full of silence to you, there's enough expression in your words to keep anyone talking for a long time  
Parker
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13 posted 2001-04-10 09:51 AM


dg, I know your still out there. Wondering around in the warm Florida weather.  
I could use some wondering.  

Hoot, so nice of you to drop in, I do miss your kind and sweet comments.  

Parker

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14 posted 2001-04-10 11:33 AM


soon..i hope soon..you can come wander..  
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15 posted 2001-04-10 04:02 PM


A note, silence.

As loug as bagpipes.

Peace, Park.

Cor

Parker
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16 posted 2001-04-10 10:20 PM


Corinne.... are you offering me a piece..
well twist my arm.  

Parker
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17 posted 2001-05-06 12:08 PM


dg, I missed replying to you here.... duh is me..  

I'm getting into that wandering mode I am.  

Parker

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