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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2001-04-08 04:21 PM


Angel's Touch

With my first breath I knew
Each day since, this love it grew
Our souls entwined from the start
Visions of you unseen filled my heart

Eternal angels, they were singing  
A love never ending, always beginning
Tenderly wrapped within the stars
These pillowed dreams from afar

Ageless now, as the sands of time
Your angels love to forever shine
A love born of the purest essence
A soul is touched, merely by your presence

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


© Copyright 2001 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-04-08 04:35 PM


EagleOne~
It's sooooooo good to see your smiling face here.

'Tenderly wrapped within the stars
These pillowed dreams from afar'


I LOVE 'pillowed dreams' ...  
*Hugs*
Now get up here more often ! !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mother_Earth
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2 posted 2001-04-08 04:39 PM


Eagle One, you have written another love filled poem.  Thank you for sharing.  Hugs,  ME
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3 posted 2001-04-08 04:44 PM


I did enjoy this a lot!  Well done.

Betty Lou Hebert

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-04-08 05:00 PM


This is very moving verse!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-04-08 05:10 PM


Oh, Eagle!!!  This is fabulous!!!  We should all be lucky enough to have such an angel.  Very nice writing, my friend.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Honeybee
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6 posted 2001-04-08 05:24 PM



Oh My! B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! You must know that I love soulmate/angel poems, and yours is perfection   My library must have this!~

Take care,
Melissa~

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-08-2001).]

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7 posted 2001-04-08 07:55 PM


This is wonderful. I love the last line, it says it all.  
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8 posted 2001-04-08 09:28 PM


Eternal angels, they were singing  
A love never ending, always beginning
Tenderly wrapped within the stars
These pillowed dreams from afar
====================
ya know....if I didnt know better...
I might think this was one of those Fate & Destiny poems   *S*  
Very lovely write of a heart and soul.
beautiful cadence kissed poem Eagle poet sir  

Looking hard into your eyes,
There was nobody I'd ever known.
Such an empty surprise ...
To feel so alone.
~jackson browne~


EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
9 posted 2001-04-08 10:49 PM


Marge ~ It’s good to be here and to be smiling   ....and I’ll try to be back more often, thank you!

M E ~  I thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts, take care!

Trillium ~ I'm so glad you enjoyed.

Kathleen ~ Thank you my friend, I always appreciate your comments.

L W ~ I think that somewhere out there we all do, thank you!

Melissa ~ It is an honour to be in your library

PDV ~ I’m glad you found this enjoyable.  

Janet ~  ..and if I didn’t know better I might call myself a poet.    I thank you for your kind comments my friend.

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


Paula Finn
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10 posted 2001-04-09 02:02 AM


Glad you found her
tracie66
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11 posted 2001-04-09 07:09 AM


Ageless now, as the sands of time
Your angels love to forever shine
A love born of the purest essence
A soul is touched, merely by your presence

Oh boy eddie, what a most tender render this piece is and that last stanza.....breathless *sigh* and the last line I think is purely angelic all on it's own.
This my friend is devine...simply devine

winged ~HUGS~ floating your way
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 04-09-2001).]

Kit McCallum
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12 posted 2001-04-09 07:12 AM


"Tenderly wrapped within the stars
These pillowed dreams from afar"

Beautiful EagleOne!  Lovely sentiments, glowing with love through each line. Wonderful writing!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

EagleOne
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13 posted 2001-04-09 04:43 PM


Paula ~ Angels! Soulmates! whatever you call them, I feel I've been blessed to have found some friends who have been able to reach out and touch my soul.

Tracie ~ To be able to make you breathless is an honour my friend, take care!

Kit ~ So glad you enjoyed this one, 'tis wonderful to be back and to finally have something positive to post.

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


Kethry
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14 posted 2001-04-10 10:20 AM


Eddie,
It's good to see you smiling, it's good to see you posting such inspirational work.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Bec
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15 posted 2001-04-10 10:26 AM


Eddie,
I've been told so much about your poems. Now I've had the chance to see one for myself. This is a beautiful poem, so many wonderful images.
Bec

The past is a foreign country - they do things differently there ~ Unknown

Dee
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16 posted 2001-04-10 10:33 AM


Eddie, as usual I am impressed by your poetry. This is so sweet and beautiful.
(btw it was me who raved to Bec about your poems!   )
I especially love this line:

"A soul is touched, merely by your presence"

Beautiful sentiment.

Take care,
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Sunshine
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17 posted 2001-04-10 10:33 AM


This is so beautiful!
EagleOne
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18 posted 2001-04-11 06:39 AM


Kethry ~ My smiles of late have been all to rare and indeed it feels good to be able to smile and to find some positive inspiration. I thank you, take care!

Bec ~ Firstly welcome to passions, secondly thank you for the kind words. It's always a good feeling to know others find my ramblings enjoyable.

Dee ~ mmm, so you've been out raving again have you    Should I ask just what you've been saying?    It's always a pleasure to know that you've read and enjoyed my rambling, thanks and take care!

Sunshine ~  From someone who writes with such beauty as yourself,  those words mean so much, thank you!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


Butterflies_dont_cry
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19 posted 2001-04-14 07:01 AM


My dear friend~
Your weaving has reached a level beyond the
star kissed skies..this is beautiful and
heart filled with love...your heart shines
and so does your poetry.  So much to say
about this piece...just so few words...
I can only hope you KNOW~

Butterflies_dont_cry
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20 posted 2001-04-14 07:07 AM



OK....so I had a butterfly/blonde moment...to
the library with this one...as always


[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 04-14-2001).]

EagleOne
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21 posted 2001-04-14 05:27 PM


Butterflies ~ Your words do cause me to blush my friend, and yes, sometimes words are not required, it's all about knowing! Take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


Meadowmuse
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22 posted 2001-04-15 05:02 PM


There is so much tenderness present in this poem. It is lovely, Eagle One.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


EagleOne
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23 posted 2001-04-16 04:29 PM


Claire ~ No comparison to your tender weaves, I'm glad you enjoyed, thanks.

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


Suetang
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24 posted 2001-05-02 02:25 AM


Eddie
What a wonderful poem I picked as the first one for me to read.  I am now eager to read more of your beautiful work.  Any poem that mentions angels always grabs my attention and I thought this was so beautifully written.  Take care....Sue

Suetang

Kit McCallum
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25 posted 2001-05-02 06:18 AM


Just came back for another read ... Tender and lovely sentiments EagleOne ...  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 05-02-2001).]

Gentle Spirit
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26 posted 2001-05-03 08:33 PM


Eagle One, yet another wonderful piece of art has flowed from your pen sir.  Beautiful sharing of the heart.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Irish Rose
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27 posted 2001-05-03 08:34 PM


I also came back for another read, Eddie, you should bless us with more fine poetry, it's from the heart and so expressive in sincerity.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Dee
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28 posted 2001-05-04 06:00 AM


Eddie, seems your poetry compels us to read and reread! Beautifully done, my friend.

    
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

EagleOne
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29 posted 2001-05-05 04:49 AM


Sue ~ I thank you for your too kind comments, take care!

Kit ~ You are welcome at anytime, thanks!

Gentle Spirit ~ I'm not so sure it's art but I do thank you for your valued comment, take care!

Kathleen ~ As you know, from the heart is all I know, thank you, and take care!

Dee ~ I've never though of my words as compelling before, Thank you friend, take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


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