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tradewind
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0 posted 2001-04-08 01:58 PM


his neck revealed
a watermark
evidence of
how far he'd go
into this new
relationship
it seemed a decent length
and so...

we bravely stepped
into the deep
frigid waters
surrounding all
both praying that
only egos
would shrivel up
and be made small

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-04-08 02:34 PM


and now. . . well. . .  

that first step can be a doozy. . . but sometimes. . .

well written tradewind. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

tradewind
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2 posted 2001-04-08 05:24 PM


thanks Sven, seems the steps after the first
are kinda steep as well...haha!

thanks for reading and commenting

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