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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-04-08 10:01 AM

Calligraphic Thoughts

a poet who thought
his thoughts
had dried
his ink thickened
his feel
less quickened
was wrong

so wrong

not soon enough
come
too soon
gone

come hither
dear poet
come and let
us rehearse
a line of fine
sweet lines
of verse

for I am one
who seeks
your name

so that I may
pleasure in
your gifts,
again

you lope across
lean grasses green
into the blue
that beholds you

in short sweet
verse
oh please
rehearse
the sound of you

in quill
let quiver
sweet sounds
that shiver
up and
down
my spine’s
thin line

and let
me sigh
again

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 04-08-2001).]

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2001-04-08 10:27 AM

yes, indeed....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-04-08 11:31 AM

in quill
let quiver
sweet sounds
that shiver
up and
down
my spine’s
thin line
~~~~~~~~~~~~
It sends shivers up and down my spine. You do weave you words well :-)

I look forward to seeing your name and the accompanying work.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2001-04-08 11:43 AM

Lady utterly outstanding, I really am dumb this is so truly perfect.

Absolutely wonderful

Take care
             love and warm stuff
                Puck

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-04-08 12:53 PM

LadyInWhite~
Oh .. how perfectly inspiring.
That should fill the inkwell nicely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-08 01:34 PM

Well you sure filled up my inkwell too! Superb!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-04-08 02:38 PM

"the sound of you. . . "

would be like music to the ears. . .

this is excellent. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2001-04-08 04:55 PM

I really have come to love your style LiW - - be prepared

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