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thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
Posts 223


0 posted 2001-04-08 06:01 AM



If Heart burns  
& soul yearns
that's where butterfly's
churn;

Really needing, beyond pleading,
then an instant plan can learn.
Goals not far away are often here to stay;
Never leaving taking the same turn;

Real ambition thought of in a moments notice,
may smoothly accomplish
something smashingly brand new;

Discerning reckoning
on an inventive futures beckoning,
can only help share decisions right now.

An alignment can bend similarities to send,
simple nature to furnished desire.
Finding creative rarities
blending into new realities
moulds the burnished mind of the trier.


© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
Posts 369
Pakistan
1 posted 2001-04-08 08:06 AM


It is GREAT.........Carry on
helen smith
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since 2001-03-12
Posts 240

2 posted 2001-04-08 05:54 PM


so positive   Craig  full of hope          ..I began with butterflies   but    they had settled         by  the close ........you make  me  stay for     so long with your work.....
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