Jenn The Dreamer (review of aliases#1)

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Open Poetry #13

Jenn The Dreamer (review of aliases#1)

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-04-08 03:50 AM

Open
Shyly passionate
Desperate soul,
Searching for a place to share her passion,
For words, writing.
Perhaps a home for them in an accepting crowd.
Reluctantly, she began
But as the time grew on they welcomed her.
Acceptance and tasteful feedback.
A new world, the internet,
And she was on the brink of herself then,
Standing on the edge without ever knowing.
And she grew on to make friends.
She grew well and branched out,
And occasionally, she comes back to herself,
Regaining her original composure,
But those moments are fleeting,
For she isn't as innocent as in the beginning.
This, is only the beginning of the story.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2001-04-08 03:52 AM

Ah another familiar name from my scroll days good job on this one!

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

2 posted 2001-04-08 11:10 AM

Jenn,
A wonderful poem...I feel the same.
Red

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-08 02:43 PM

many parts of the same whole??

we shall see. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-08 10:40 PM

If only we could bottle that innocence of when everything was new to us. That would be something! Nice portrait here, Temptress.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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