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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-04-08 01:14 AM



April Mooning

~*Marge Tindal*~

~This orb
of light in fullest
adornment is so feverishly
aglow across an indigo night sky
Keenly aware that her magical pull
shines on new love seeking poetically
perfect phrase to speak their language
Passionately felt feelings of awareness
in heartfelt phases of loving promises
Shades of magnificent blues in hues
of the heart are painted vividly
This orbiting orb of light
April mooning~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                             noles1@totcon.com             

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 04-08-2001).]

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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2001-04-08 01:38 AM


Sigh...oh yes...I was hanging out the window at work tonight watching that beautiful moon wrapped in her lacecloud gown waltzing across the sky...
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2 posted 2001-04-08 01:50 AM


I am laughing myself silly up here Marge - I said, "Gee I wonder if she has a full moon there too?" ROTFLMAO - Same moon, different place!  Oh boy, I need a vacation!  This was a beautiful piece but watch your email here comes another moon! LOL  Great form x 2 on this one fair lady.

~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~

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3 posted 2001-04-08 01:58 AM


Paula~
Your reply is beautiful enough to be a poem in itself !
Thank you. *Hugs*

Mysteria~
I was sitting here, eyes half-closed,
in desperate need of going to bed ...
and now I'm laughing myself silly !

DUH !   She said WHAT ?  
LOL !  What a trip you are, gal !
Will check the e-box in the morning ...
don't know if I could handle another 'moon' tonight !
TOO funny !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2001-04-08 02:53 AM


breathtaking....Marge~...


Greeneyes~


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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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5 posted 2001-04-08 04:01 AM


Hello there my sweet friend  
You my gal are a true treasure and your words always beautiful....I love your writing and the heart & soul that drives it.
you know ~HUGS~ always floating in your direction.
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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6 posted 2001-04-08 04:34 AM


ahhh yes... when I saw the moon tonite..
I said tis a poets moon ...
and I knew your luna muse would be kissing you...
so lovely you are, in the moonlight inspired  

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2001-04-08 04:54 AM


your  words and those of the responses are all beautiful *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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8 posted 2001-04-08 07:08 AM


Marge...this is breath taking...
of course I had to read twice
because I had just read one of
'Deers poems and "April Mooning"
had a new meaning prior to reading

But once my mind was in the proper
frame....it was beautiful...you weave
like no other~

Cerenity
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9 posted 2001-04-08 09:00 AM


Hi Marge,

Yes you have captured the true beauty in this one of last nights moon, I had to keep going outside to catch glimpes of her, she had great influence on my soul last night, her and you are both so beautiful and pleasing to be around,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2001-04-08 09:32 AM


Just another orb



winkin' in!

Doug Pretorius
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11 posted 2001-04-08 09:41 AM


Beautiful poem Marge! And I loved the full moon shape of the words, very well done!

doreen peri
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12 posted 2001-04-08 11:27 AM


hey girl!!!! you're mooning the world again!!! WOOHOO!!!!

nice write, miss Poet!

certainly very shapely!

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13 posted 2001-04-08 11:34 AM


Magie girl, I knew when im saw that moon it was a Margie girl moon, absolutely divine love a fabulous piece and YOU know I love it don't you.

Now time to zoom off again, if I can slip out again later I will love. Your beautiful writing is worth the black looks I get from all those wretched docs.

Actually you know I have a soft spot for them all,.........

It's called a swamp!

     love you always sweetie
          Mushy
            

            

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Deep in the heart
14 posted 2001-04-08 11:45 AM


Wonderful, artful ... gues that would be, by definition, a work of art.

Well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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15 posted 2001-04-08 12:18 PM



And Margie pens yet another perfect "shape" poem.  Beautiful, just perfect  

Here's a 21 moon salute to you  

Take care,
Melissa~

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GreenEyes~
Across the night -
in light adorning -
taking our breath away ...
Thank you .. that may just be inspiration for another !

Tracie~
So nice to catch you here in the glow
of a perfect moon that lit the night.
I LOVE seeing you ...
gonna go see if you left me some poetry to read !

JanetMarie~
Talk about inspiration ! !
What a GORGEOUS picture !
Thank you for sharing that, hon.

Wynter~
You ALL leave 'stars' to light this poet's heart.  Thank you.

ButterfliesDC~
LOL !  That Balladeer can 'moon' like no other !

Cerenity~
I am glad to hear that others
get as much enjoyment out of her glowing as I do.
Thank you, love.

Karilea~
And in your glowing
I am caught knowing
that you shine like no other !

Doug~
Welcome to Passions and into the moonlight of our family circle.

Doreen~
WOOMoonHOO .. Sounds like a 'captioned' flick !  

MarshaLove~
LOL @ 'swamp' ...
If those docs get in your way
MOON 'EM !

InterLoper~
Thank you for 'artful' ...
That's me alright !  

Melissa~
LOL @ '21 moon salute'
I'll bet I've done that many !
Always love sharing that light !

*Thanks ALL !
You've made me smile again.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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17 posted 2001-04-08 01:21 PM


Marge--It was too cloudy again last night to capture any mooning, well almost...but today is crystal light and tonight, who knows.  Love your poem, and you.
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2001-04-08 01:28 PM


Martie~
And tonight she waltzes full ...
she's promised you the first dance.
Love ya', Sis.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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