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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2001-04-08 12:05 PM

More

I want more.
Excitement
in voyages
that exhilarate,
with
ever-shifting
sands
to mask
reality's ugliness.

Semi-hidden,
I will always
be
a mystery.

Bare
to naked eyes,
fantasies
grow stale,
then
I am
only perplexed
by me.

© 2001 Corinne Bailey

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-08 12:07 PM

NJice poem and I hope you get your excitement. Joyce

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

2 posted 2001-04-08 12:13 PM

Lovely poem.
Red

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2001-04-08 01:55 PM

Thanks Joyce and Red!

Corinne

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-09 07:39 PM

we should always have this. . .

excellent Corinne. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-04-09 07:57 PM

The complexity of this deserves one read after another and always see something different with each read..

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2001-04-09 08:22 PM

Thank you, Sven and Kathleen!

Corinne

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2001-04-10 08:59 AM

Oh my...I have missed your vvoice in poetry. As wonderful as always Corrine

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

8 posted 2001-04-10 09:59 AM

"...but I can't help but think that you are making a mistake by not letting the woman talk..." (Edward P. Dowd to Dr. Chumley...from the movie, "Harvey"). A lovely poem, Corinne. Bob

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-04-10 10:41 AM

enjoy

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

10 posted 2001-04-10 10:53 AM

yep - agree totally ~S~

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

11 posted 2001-04-10 06:54 PM

Great write, corinne...definitely need something to take us away from reality once in a while!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

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