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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-04-07 09:46 PM


Sendings

soft, sweet,
swiftly sent,
and in my scent
I sent to you
on breeze of ease
on breezes blue
would you capture
the
“love you, too”?

Yes….

yes you would,
I know you will
and I shall wait
the day until
you should
send
to me
on breeze
the lovely tune,
your melodies
that I would
hear
in your key

for I hear
your song,
I feel
your real,
though
we’ve not touched,
we are oh, so,
surreal

in our around
and in our
sound,
you love
my voice,
I have no choice,
but to love
yours too

and even more

I love you so
j’et adore

so I send
to you,
by rote,
a common
query,
a solemn
note
do you
love me?
as I
love you?

chances are,
I’ll bet you do!


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Wilfred Yeats
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1 posted 2001-04-07 10:15 PM


Just what I wanted - just what I'm looking for - and - most likely will "send" ~G~  - Why do I enjoy your writing so much?
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2001-04-07 10:22 PM


Please send them!!  This was wonderful writing.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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3 posted 2001-04-08 12:08 PM


If he says no, psychiatric advice would be in order  

This is very romantic piece...words of love floating on breezes above oceans blue seeking a response...what a combination...

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4 posted 2001-04-08 02:22 AM


Ohhhh sigh!
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5 posted 2001-04-08 10:03 AM


oh what questions do arise....
Do you love me, as i love you?
Bernie
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Bernie Slicker

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6 posted 2001-04-12 05:56 PM


Chances are
The 12th of Never
Unforgettable
'Til There Was You


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.



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7 posted 2001-04-14 05:34 PM


this is absolutely wonderful. . .

truly you have heard the voice of love. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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