Open Poetry #13 |
Sendings |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sendings soft, sweet, swiftly sent, and in my scent I sent to you on breeze of ease on breezes blue would you capture the “love you, too”? Yes…. yes you would, I know you will and I shall wait the day until you should send to me on breeze the lovely tune, your melodies that I would hear in your key for I hear your song, I feel your real, though we’ve not touched, we are oh, so, surreal in our around and in our sound, you love my voice, I have no choice, but to love yours too and even more I love you so j’et adore so I send to you, by rote, a common query, a solemn note do you love me? as I love you? chances are, I’ll bet you do! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Just what I wanted - just what I'm looking for - and - most likely will "send" ~G~ - Why do I enjoy your writing so much? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Please send them!! This was wonderful writing. All writing comes |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If he says no, psychiatric advice would be in order This is very romantic piece...words of love floating on breezes above oceans blue seeking a response...what a combination... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ohhhh sigh! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
oh what questions do arise.... Do you love me, as i love you? Bernie A smile a day keeps the world 'g. Bernie Slicker |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Chances are The 12th of Never Unforgettable 'Til There Was You Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is absolutely wonderful. . . truly you have heard the voice of love. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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