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I Miss You
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I turn to capture the sunset and you Woven beautifully in my mind Chin resting on fingertips Eyes far away A moment's pause Ending on a soft sigh Carried upon the wind To you
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Soft, sweet, swiftly sent.... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
The is so very pretty...leaving one with a peaceful feeling. Thank you.  Michael Proust- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Lovely, short and sweet longing within this~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
here's hoping that sigh is heard. . . wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"A moment's pause" T'is the key line in this me thinks, J A W, and could be your title. . . . and the wind carries such a burden for all of us, doesn't it . . . Krawdad /:-}== |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustAWoman~ Soft, delicate, lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Thank you all so much! You are so kind.
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Here's hoping he hears and responds. Lovely writing. All writing comes |
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ForwardSearching Junior Member
since 2001-03-23
Posts 35 |
Very beautiful and heartfelt writing! The winds are strong today, I'm sure he felt it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh that precious second when the sight of someone we love causes such stillness. Oh how I loved this. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Ditto back to you..... Bernie. A a day keeps the world 'g.Bernie Slicker |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Just A Woman....soft, graceful...like the parachute that is the seed of a dandilion. Bob |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I understand this one well. There is a part of my heart that I need to let go but then I read a poem like this...and I can't. Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOVE this!!! You've captured the moment perfectly SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Just A Women, Good thoughts, good words, good message. |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I really like this. Reminds me of someone that I'm missing right now. I sent you an e-mail to tell you more about this one. Thank you for sharing. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This was like a cool refreshing breeze. Loved it. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
There are times when going through here is worthwhile. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh how beautiful...very touching |
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