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Open Poetry #13

Death of a Lover's Heart

Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2001-04-07 07:32 PM

lying still, panic stricken
feeling nothing but sheer terror and pain
my heart aching... slowly crumbling
with the dagger of hatred thrust into my breast
the blood stained hands of the asassin
gently touching my cheek as I lie lifeless
with my last breath I utter "why?"
as I slowly slip into the dark abyss
I suddenly hear only four words
uttered from the killers lips
spoken with anger and disgust
"I don't love you"
with those words, I was delt the fatal blow
because no wound could ever compare
to the wound of a broken heart

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-04-07 08:49 PM

I have heard those words. But it does not do you any good for me to say...you will survive.

An intense write, indeed.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-08 12:13 PM

Of course when we love someone we want them to feel the same...and how heartbreaking when we realize it may not happen...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-09 07:50 PM

and no wound heals slower. . .

excellent writing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-04-09 08:40 PM

Yes, but the heart doesn't die..only gets wounded...Only hope sometimes dies, so we can't loose that. I felt the pain in this one and perhaps some anger. Enjoyed!

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

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