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My torment
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My torment |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
You appear in my dream, sensual and real. You whisper, things that I cannot hear. I ask you to repeat it, still I cannot discern. And in my frustration, you leave again. You reappear in my dream, So ardently and strong. Again you whisper, I cannot listen. In my torment, I reach out and touch you. And you walk away, never to return. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Just dream and enjoy it. Cool poem. Joyce |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Walker...herein you have put your finger on one of life's many challenges....discerning what can be touched and what cannot without producing disturbance. Good. Bob |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This sounds like a nightmare and well I can relate, how vivid. Kathleen Blake |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I always enjoy the cool style of your poems. This was another great one. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walker....in dreams, sometimes actions speak louder than words.... I enjoyed! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This one's got me thinking. I agree, sounds like a nightmare. A teasing nightmare. Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Better watch out. A return is likely  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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