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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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when I'm with you the world should stop be asleep cars shouldn't drive by the phone shouldn't ring the only sounds should be the twinkling of the stars the sweep of the moon and the beating of our hearts the clock should be silent in its ticking the second hand stopping at 12 and not moving again until morning this is how it should be and yet. . . when is it?? it's morning and the clock has stopped. . . . . . again. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whoa! If the clock stops ticking....you would stay enveloped in night.... now there's a thought {~,^} |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely. Even the clock was too involved to re-start. Joyce |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
lovely |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
the clock should be silent in its ticking the second hand stopping at 12 and not moving again until morning if only time could stand still....sigh...beautiful Sven....  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
i enjoy the "voice" in your writing, Sven always something soft in your words very nice |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, it's a thought that I've thought for a long time. . . thank you my friend. . . Wynter, Joyce, who needs time?? Thank you for reading. . . Kathleen, thank you as always my friend. . . Greeneyes, who says hat time can't stand still?? Just watch. . . thank you. . . tradewind, that "voice" is always with me. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD dear heart, if time could stand still, ah there's a consumtion to be wished. You know I what to hold beck the day, and live a little longer in night. Wonderful writing love as always you are magnificent. truly awesome, and you know I love it. Take care love and warm stuff Bubbles  Oh if only I could stop time, then I could be exactly where I wish so much to be. Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beauty, Sven Pen. If the world won't stop then you have to make it stop! LOL! Don't ask me how though! still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, if we could make some nights last forever..what a lovely thought. You sure know how to speak to the heart. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Sven...loved this... "silent in its ticking" .....helen [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 04-09-2001).] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
loved the essence of time standing still, especially love the silence, no ticking, that ticking can be annoying! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Bubbles. . . if only it were possible. . . thank you love. . . Temptress. . . there are ways. . . I think. . .  thank you. . .Angel. . . I think that I'd like to make every night last forever. . . thank you. . . helen. . . thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Rosebud. . . no doubt!! That ticking makes me want to smash the clock!! LOL thanks!! ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ahhh, if things could only be so! Corinne |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
yes, Time should and DOES stand still when Love is True.... a blissful moment can fill an eternity... wonderful..... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I loved it! Time sholud remain still while we love, and sometimes it really feels like that. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I almost missed this ... glad I didn't. You have stopped time. Quite a feat, or at that time, a fete. Write on good poet. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I almost missed this ... glad I didn't. You have stopped time. Quite a feat, or at that time, a fete. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You Sir, stop time with each beautiful poem such as this!! *sigh* Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Corinne, who says they can't be??  Thank you. . . doreen, I know that you know. . . hopefully one day. . . so will we all. . . thank you my friend. . . vandana, thank you. . . Interloper, my powers are beyond imagination. . . . . . thank you!!!Isis, you know that I do. . . thank you so much my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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