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In A Clearing
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In A Clearing |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* In A Clearing *~He summoned me, and I went. He led me to a small clearing, Such a quiet spot, almost hidden, Buried in the woods of his past. My body froze in that silence. He told me how these woods Provided his food, home, faith, A sense of well being. Overjoyed in memories, He smiled his toothless smile. I was today to hear power. He would summon the great wolf, Creating a bond forever, He becoming my guardian spirit. I humbled as he sang the Sacred song of the wolf over me. My heart beat in unison, With every bang of his drum. I sat frozen in his time, As he chanted to the wolf Bidding his presence, To share in this strange ritual. Spellbound in hope, I heard Every note he chanted, Every beat of his drum, Passed down from generations Of his forefathers. So miniscule was the tiny Cedar seed he picked up And held in his cupped hands. This, our link to creation. Echoes of the sacred wolf song, Whispered on sunbeams, and Whistled through the trees. Resounding off the rocks. And we waited for the wolf's cry. None came - so louder he sang. Almost obsessed in his purpose. Soon tears replaced his song. He realized there were No wolves left to respond. His heart heavy in the knowing He was unable to give me Honor, and faith in his past. I remember it well, I said, “Are you finished Grampa?” “Can I go play now?” He nodded in approval, I ran on, but I turned I saw my Grampa, our Chief, This proud man I worshipped On his knees, head bowed, Crying tears of shame. ~*~ Art: "Sprirt of the Wolf" - Paul Calle ~*www.world-wide-art.com*~ Music: "Fire Circle" - Elan Michaels ~*www.members.xoom.com/elanmichaels*~ ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 04-08-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't we just wish, though, that we had stayed a moment longer, to let the wisdom sink in.... You have brought to mind a poem that I believe I shall repost....you will know it when you see it.... enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, my friend~ You touch so lovingly on your remembrances .. This is evidence of the touching of the Spirit in you ... do not silence it, sweet poet ... Write your heart and your heart will be heard ... always. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
He was trying to give you a lesson and he did. Perhaps the wolf didn't come but you found compassion from him, my friend. Joyce |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
awesome...Big smiles!!...Bravo!! and so well done too! Great presentation with the special pizazz that you give everything you do! hugs x100 more. Koko Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sunshine: Yes I do wish we had stayed longer, and I am home now so will hunt down your poem. Marge: Sweet friend...just when my embers are but smoldering dark masses of grey, you rekindle them to vibrant flames with friendship! Thank you for reading this (was it even a poem I think not!) lol oh well! I had to write it, so it is something. Joyce: Whenever I can not find something I always go to the same place and it was there all the time. Thank you for reading this I do appreciate your time in doing it. Koko: Aloha baby! One day I am coming there and gonna squeeze you so tight you will be so sorry you are this nice to me LOL. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This, our link to creation. Echoes of the sacred wolf song, Whispered on sunbeams, and Whistled through the trees. Resounding off the rocks. And we waited for the wolf's cry. None came - so louder he sang. Almost obsessed in his purpose. Soon tears replaced his song. =================================== oh yes... this is superb in every way very very cool write Mysteria .... and one I will share with a certain cowboy. outstanding message of wisdom and display of both respect and poetry. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh thank you Janet Marie, I appreciate it because when I grow up I want to write like you big cowgirls! LMAO - and no I am not kidding! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Fabulously told, Mysteria. Someday though, the child will realize the implications of this. This graphic is awesome!!  All writing comes |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lone Wolf: The child did regret it! You know, I look a long time for just the right pictures to go with the words, or visa versa so thank you for noticing and your lovely commment. |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Once again and fantastic poem, and the pic and music were so perfect. I am in awe at your writing. I look for your poems. Your poems show deep insights. Red |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
oops. Having to comment agian. hehee. I forgot to add it to my library, and I liked it sooo much. Red |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. It seems like I keep repeating that for your work. I don't mean to be redundant. Your works seem to have no horizon ... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Red-uni: I am honored to think you wish to save this. I love the old ways and use them as much as I can daily. I feel blessed in having even a fraction of the knowledge I have, and thrilled about what yet I am to learn. Interloper: You truly are a wonderful supporter, and I do thank you so much for your constant endurance of my "epic" stories. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I love your stories! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
You took me home again to the reservation, to the stories that were tender, to the mystic realm of spirit. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
JLR- Thank you it is only one small comment like that makes it all worthwhile. Julian - Reservation? Oh Mabe, after the Easter thing last night, you are really going to try to split my sides in laughter you know that? LOL |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon--This is a wonderful story...so full of wisdom and truth...for surely the sharing of tears and the humble knee are a great lesson to a child. |
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kismetkelsey Junior Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 32Canada |
I loved the drumming!! And loved the guardian like way of the wolf.Wonderful work my friend!!~kismetkelsey |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martie: You GOT the lesson - you get the gold star! I am not surprised you did, and so pleased that you understood and liked it. Cheryl: er Kismit - It is your love of spirit and music that drew you in, and it is that same love that will someday be your path to serenity and peace (trust me on this) oh...thank you for reading, hehe. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was drawn so deeply into your story and listening so intently for the wolf's cry that I didn't realize my speakers were turned off until I was almost through reading all these replies. *S* That realization just gave me an excuse to re-read and again appreciate a superb poem... for once, a blonde moment pays off. *S* |
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