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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-04-07 10:13 AM




                                          
It has been a constant struggle
to let my inner light shine,
to keep believing in myself
and in this heart of mine.

  I have doubted myself
and wondered if I'm strong,
second guessing my own thoughts
often wondering if I am wrong.

I know that deep inside me
there shines an inner light
and I can feel a subtle warmth
taking control and burning bright.

I can not suppress these feelings
nor run from what is meant to be,
I must let life takes it course
and I must be true to me.

                                      
(Some memories from a year ago.....and I am thankful for finding the strength...)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-07 10:21 AM


This is a lovely poem.  Your inner light shines.  Joyce
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-04-07 10:34 AM


GentleSpirit~
There is great strength evidenced in this piece.

'I know that deep inside me
there shines an inner light
and I can feel a subtle warmth
taking control and burning bright.'


Shine on, sweet poet !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2001-04-07 10:34 AM


Yes, yes, yes, Gentle Spirit!  I believe it takes a great deal of strength to have a gentle spirit, most assuredly!
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