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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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0 posted 2001-04-07 08:44 AM



It’s happening again
Deja vu
This scene that is about to begin
Why does history have to repeat itself?
You know what I mean
The airing of the dirty laundry
Oh if these walls could talk
But for now
I will strip them of their memory.
I can no longer sweep this
All this (throwing hands in air)
Under the rug.
I try looking out the window
But my vision is marred.
The stale smoke of your cigar lingers
Stagnant of days gone by.
So I have nothing left to do
I inhale a deep breath
I turn to you and begin
(pause)
(sighs)

My Spring Cleaning

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Panne447
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since 2001-04-03
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1 posted 2001-04-07 09:15 AM


Kitkat, Interesting idea on the wash-that-man-right-out-of-my-hair theme.  Panne
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2 posted 2001-04-07 11:26 AM


KitKat~
Oh ... I like the very descriptiveness of this -

'The airing of the dirty laundry
Oh if these walls could talk
But for now
I will strip them of their memory.
I can no longer sweep this
All this (throwing hands in air)
Under the rug.'


Well said, poet.
~*Marge*~

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snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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3 posted 2001-04-09 09:23 PM


Yes, a great write, indeed!  Love the descriptiveness of this!

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to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
4 posted 2001-04-09 10:34 PM


Thanks for your replies.
I spent most of last week doing spring cleaning...and I still have more to do  Yec!!!

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

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