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Between Your Sheets
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Between Your Sheets |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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 Do you,my beloved,dream of vigils That we lovers keep Between silken sheets As soundly you sleep? While all the night long, I call forth your name, With all depth of my soul And every nerve set aflame. If only, my love, Could you see into my heart, How fond and true, How I loathe being apart My warmest of words, So poorly,do explain The eager desire, all consuming, melting pain And through my very blood and soul I be compelled to feel, That which you might not believe Nor may I fully reveal. Hence, every word and metaphor Must sadly render less And yet,beloved, which I long to completely express ......between your sheets. [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow! This was so beautifully done but so very sad, so...I guess you did your job well Koko, as you made me "feel" what you wrote. Great job. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
I read your words and immediately knew what was in your heart.. a most tender poem, beautiful graphic and one of my favorite songs, 'I Finally Found Someone'. This made me think about how loving someone, at times, can be, oh, so bittersweet. A fine write, dear heart..  Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How beautiful! Kathleen Blake |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Okay, Lady ! ! You batted 1000 with this one ! Not only are your thoughts as silken as the sheets ... and your lilting music, sheer serenity, but then you go and wrap it up with such a beautiful picture ... WOW ! Just WOW ! ... all the way ! Grand Slam - Home Run ! In case you couldn't tell ... I LOVE IT !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Mysteria: Thanks for all your support and comments .. Maybe I shall be more than just "poetical writer" trying to be a "real poet" oneday and be found worthy..LOL smiles atcha luv ya GF! You just keep on going gurl! Kate: Thanks sweetie and yes you do probably know me well enuff to know why I wrote it. And thanks for your loving friendship and support during such hard times. i love you Kate! Irish rose: I am glad you enjoyed this one I loved your homepage as well ! Marge: Now I am smiling if Marge gave me the thumbs up. That is a real compliment coming from you. I do so enjoy all that you write as well. I am a Margie fan! Thanks for commenting on this piece. Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
Wow..this is wonderful Koko! a real touching poem! xoxoxox Rick |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
I left you something  Hope you enjoy.x0x0x me |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
RJ thank you for your comments and your friendship. I appreciate you and I loved your poems. Are you taking the class still? Your poems have come along so well. Hugs to you! I saved these to disk. Koko Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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