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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2001-04-07 12:52 PM


In a moment I am lost
in your eyes
in a second
I am lost in dream

For your eyes
are portals
to another world
another time

Where there is only
you and me
dancing for ever
in eternity

As a star beam
catches your eye
on this
this starry night.



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1 posted 2001-04-07 12:54 PM


serene on this night i see no stars but love your poem so
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2 posted 2001-04-07 12:55 PM


Lost in someone's eyes...how dreamy...
Marie~

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2001-04-07 01:34 AM


Thank you!
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4 posted 2001-04-07 09:32 AM


Brad, this little write likes me, very much so!  Thank you!
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5 posted 2001-04-07 10:58 AM


Lovely, truly!  And the closing line sent my mind into Van Gogh's Starry Night, what a heavenly place for two lovers to be.  
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6 posted 2001-04-07 11:23 AM


BradMajors~
Nicely portrayed ...

'For your eyes
are portals
to another world
another time'


To get lost in the doorway of mesmerize of comely eyes
...very dreamingly said.
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2001-04-07 01:15 PM


*SIGH*   beautifully done!    SEA
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