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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Inspired.... Today Still missing you In need of arms to hold In want of lips that press a kiss Wishing Wishing To have again My yesterdays, always Viewing you as never before Inspired From the heart of thought it came to me a surprise upon surprise warm and tender, soft his words could feel the burn of eyes while wondering with widened mind inspired by his sense of knowing touch, of loving much kindhearted, yet intense Sunrise Mornings waking Uncovering life in me Each day filled with the new of you To Hold To hold Cherished Moments Yesterdays' desires Tomorrow thoughts that inspire Visions Visions Lost in your steal Held in the grasp of words From the heart of thought, each day's Sunrise From the heart of thought it came to me a surprise upon surprise warm and tender, soft his words could feel the burn of eyes while wondering with widened mind inspired by his sense of knowing touch, of loving much kindhearted, yet intense ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Beautiful  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Brad..was tinkering with two different styles... ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wynter~ I REALLY like how you did this.....it's great!! SEA |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Very good |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
W/M Hey, love your sense of adventure with this. I like it, I like it. /:-}== |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SEA, BrightStar and Krawdad...thank you all for reading ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
I like the way you did this one. It was lovely.Red |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Inspiration suits you very well. Lovely thoughts, as always. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wynter, nobody does cinquain rounds like you and this combination platter...perfect. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Red-uni thank you, I at times like to be different, althopugh I don't always succeed PoeticKnight Inspiration always suits me..I wear it every night to dream in. Thank you kind Sir Kethry You always notice my style..thank you Keth, I appreciate you and your words always ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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