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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Wind I looked it up, you see, ~ wind ~ and do you say it wind or ~ wind ~ I don’t know how your mind works but it does or you would not have read this far… so I believe then you cast your lot to stars as do I, sometimes, toward the sky just because I can but I digress, nevertheless, let’s move on… for it is windy now blowing, showing tribute of might tearing sight my eyelids blink don’t you think yours would too? in the dust from mighty blue…. skies are dark as is the night and lowsome clouds are the highlight of nightly news that sing the blues of spring, and bring such fright… for some… for me… anticipation…. nature! How I anticipate your forces of courses that lie before us a chorus of rhythm of might and right and even blight that befalls us all at times… nature! You are the soul and the goal of my shoal and I behold you in awe! Nature! with winsome string you pull the sing from my breast or his chest or her throat as if you wrote the very word unheard…. NATURE! an awesome thing makes church bells ring with spring and step and incline of mind all of this then sprang forth from wind on this spring night and now I shall extinguish all the lights and say god speed then say, good night |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very nice one. I like the simplicity of your words flowing down the page much like the wind cascades over us at times.  All writing comes |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
It's really windy here too...I watch the trees sway so far I'm afraid they'll just snap.....I enjoyed this poem.... SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your work carried me through on its own wind current. Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How I anticipate your forces of courses that lie before us your wind winds me up, lady  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
The Wind winds Round my face it binds Humidity's high the dampness clings but it's face is warm and spring scents swarm So I welcome the thoughts Of you it brings |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ This is stunning ! 'You are the soul and the goal of my shoal and I behold you in awe!' A big WINDY-WOWSER for this one ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you all so very much, for hearing the song, even in the storm.... |
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