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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-06 06:23 PM



Mirrored
(Cinquain round)


Mirrored
Timeless visions
A butterfly in chains
Paradise in tears of needing
The Key


The Key
Unlocking all
Memories of the night
An illusion of love seeps in
Always


Always
The silent cry
The heart of pain is heard
To be adored, filling the void
Of Hurt


Of Hurt
When love meets death
Another casualty
Broken promises bound in tears
Replaced


Replaced
A throw away
Another side of you
Dancing among imagined dreams
It Rains


It Rains
Lost evermore
Hope, within mind's portal
For the sound of dance disappears
Mirrored


~Wynter/Maureen



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-06 06:26 PM


WOW. Mirrored/linked cinquains.

Well done!  More!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-04-07 12:34 PM


thank you Interloper, I love the challenge of structured  poetry..*s

~Wynter/Maureen

* I think if  you can learn to do that you can learn to  write free verse  with more meaning..just my  opinion

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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