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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-06 06:06 PM


hands tied behind me
will not stop my loving you
I will improvise

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-04-06 06:10 PM


Whew!! It just got VERY hot in here.......very.......very....
Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2001-04-06 06:14 PM


Wow again.. So much in so little.  Joyce
Destiny Nicole
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3 posted 2001-04-06 08:23 PM


Oh be still my heart this is indeed a very short yet very succesfull way way of getting your point across to everyone, Oh goodness I loved it.
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2001-04-06 08:31 PM


nice nice
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-04-06 09:53 PM


You do this so well
take a thought and on it dwell
leaving whims behind

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-04-06 10:28 PM


What a thought this is!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2001-04-07 06:00 AM


hmmmmmm...interesting *s

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



TLee
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8 posted 2001-04-08 11:05 PM


I thought this was a very thoughtful poem. Makes you feel like you can believe in love.
BrightStar
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9 posted 2001-04-09 12:19 PM


Whoa!
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