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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-06 05:53 PM


No ~Strings~ Attached

Have no idea why I chose the above
Just heard it, liked it and so
Thought it would make an interesting name
But for a poem, about what, I don't know.

These last few days, rough, by all accounts
And I haven't handled them well.
Been moody and tense, tearful and a crab
Cancer is my sign, must tell.

So decided this evening, to just settle back,
Bathe in bubbles, pleasant thoughts and dreams.
Then closed my eyes, felt the mind's eye touch
~~Sighing, so real it all seems.

I heard your ~whisper in the heated air
Felt your breath upon my skin.
Could sense the nearness of your face
As your ~smile~ just brushed my chin.

When your lips had sought to comfort mine
As they warmed and gently pressed.
The thrill that sent me spiraling then
Was "desire", I must confess.

It's You, I look for in my dreams
Both day and night time, too.
My thoughts, my moves, my words, my breath
Are controlled, by what you do.

No strings attached, is appropriate now
It fits here, like a glove.
For always, in these mind's eye dreams
What is real, is not real love.

But warmth and just a little touch
Of calm and peace it brings
To have these feelings of needing you
And of words you sometimes sing.

So very ~~softly smiling now
Am I, when holding thoughts
Of you, and all you mean to me
In my heart, where you're now caught.

M...just an old memory
7.13.99

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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1 posted 2001-04-06 06:01 PM


"I heard your ~whisper in the heated air
Felt your breath upon my skin.
Could sense the nearness of your face
As your ~smile~ just brushed my chin."

Sensual sounding, I could almost feel him!
Excellent!

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2001-04-06 06:06 PM


Your poem is lovely.  Especially the well crafted fourth verse.  By the way we have the same sign.  Joyce
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-04-06 06:10 PM


But warmth and just a little touch
Of calm and peace it brings
To have these feelings of needing you
And of words you sometimes sing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Well Done!


I have a feeling you hear that song often.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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4 posted 2001-04-06 11:24 PM


These words are as beautiful as the thought of you taking a bubble bath, Wynter  
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2001-04-07 12:49 PM


inot2B
was meant to be sensual...from my Moonchild days..some say I wrote better then. *s thank you
  
Joyce Johnson
I am glad you like that verse...Oh a June birthday? Well then you know that moods wax and wane with the  fullness of the moon  

Interloper
Thank you, happy to have you read me  
And no I never hear that song often enough

Balladeer
Thank you, too...well thoughts are often deceiving... I searched this old one just for you *s

  oOoo~~Just Right For Two~~ooOo

\ Lying back \
( surrounded here )
oOooOoOoOOOoooOOOooOoOo
oOo..bubbles bubbles...OoO
OoOooo..everywhere..ooOoOOoO
OOooOOoooOOooOoooOOOOOooOo
Thinking of
Dreaming, too
Wondering what
He would do
If he Could
Would he then?
Could he, Would he
Want to spend
Moments in
This tub for two
Would he, Should he
I'm asking you?
Thoughts escaping
Sighhhhinggggg now
Would I like that?
hmmmmmmmm AND HOW!
Another day
dreaming here
Sighing, sighing,
Everywhere~~~~
M/M
thought it would bring a smile to your  face  
  



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-07-2001).]

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