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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-04-06 05:23 PM

Yosemite Cabin Fever

In cabined fever’s swift defines
A couple’s passion rightly climbs
Before spring’s thaw sheds the rime
A melting sweet, this sublime

Oh tender love, ‘twas the night
In silk-spun beginnings of twilight
The tender kiss offered aloft
Your lips came to caress the soft

From there the twilight grew thus dark
But your cabined fever flew to spark
Love’s true light, which grew to heights
That kept us warm throughout the nights

Ah, the hills and mountains held our souls
While the valleys below thus held our gold

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2001-04-06 05:39 PM

So beautifully done!

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-04-06 05:49 PM

I lived close to Yosemite for a few years.....it's amazing there....and this is beautiful!

SEA

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-04-06 06:28 PM

Very well done. Almost a sonnet

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2001-04-07 01:45 PM

Beautiful!!! *S*

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-07 02:07 PM

Oh this was so soft, and did it flow!

~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

6 posted 2001-04-07 02:11 PM

Need I say (as one who holds Yosemite close to his heart) I truly loved this? - Let us explore all of our country's great parks - What a travalogue we can create ~G~

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2001-04-07 04:56 PM

Now that is fever with a fervor! Nicely penned, lady...

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

8 posted 2001-04-07 08:29 PM

Brad, your response is feverish, thank you...

SEA, it is...it is...., and thank you...

Interloper, yes...sigh...almost, but not....I must ponder a little longer....posting is so much fun!....

Suthern, thank you!

Yes, Mysteria, Yosemite flows, most assuredly....

Mr. Yeats, and who shall take the photos?...

Balladeer....yes, indeed! Thank you!

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

9 posted 2001-04-07 10:06 PM

I have many scenic photos ~S~ - The others will take a better photographer ~G~

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