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Auguste
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0 posted 2001-04-06 04:19 PM


Embrace the Day

by Michael


Sometimes we all have knelt in pain
Our lives in tatters, soiled and torn
And thought we'd lose our sanity
So broken we and so forlorn

I know I have such memories
I know like me, you also do
So empty did we feel that day
The broken pieces, yet no glue

And if we had the glue it seems
Why piece them back and then go on
When all that's left are broken dreams
And the journey to make alone?

We piece them back because we must
To find new hope in days unborn
Though hurt, we have to learn to trust
And bury days that now we mourn

It's hurt and yet our heart will strive
It hungers for such tenderness
It's wounded but it will survive
And longs again to taste a kiss

And kissed again, if so you choose
Embrace the day and you'll be free
Let others see how young your heart
Wherein there lies such purity

One life we have but many days
And many years a chance to take
To shape it into perfection
With the decisions that we make

We'll make mistakes but don't lose hope
Each day renews our spirit so
Your heart will once again be kissed
And once again will love it know

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

© Copyright 2001 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-04-06 04:21 PM



A beautiful poem of hope and faith, Michael!
Wonderfully penned, this should be on a billboard sign in plain view where everyone, in every city of every country can see!~

Take care,
Melissa~

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2 posted 2001-04-06 04:24 PM


this says so much, beautifully worded.
Martie
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3 posted 2001-04-06 06:16 PM


Michael, my dear friend--I had to smile when I read this, because you posted it at a time when I needed to hear such words...

"We piece them back because we must
To find new hope in days unborn
Though hurt, we have to learn to trust
And bury days that now we mourn"

it is a remarkable thing about human nature, the way "hope floats", and this poem shows that.  Wonderful writing!

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4 posted 2001-04-06 06:21 PM


Mike   Perfect rhythm, perfect meter and a wonderful message.  Good work.  joyce
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5 posted 2001-04-06 07:38 PM


Wonderful words of encouragement applicable to many different things in life we all face...I like this one alot.

Elizabeth Anne

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6 posted 2001-04-06 10:42 PM


Melissa,
Such a sweet thing to say.  You've made me feel ten feet tall.  Thank you. :-)

Rosebud,
I'm so glad you liked this piece.  I appreciate you reading this.

Martie,
I'm glad you got something out of this.  Thanks for coming by.

Joyce,
Thank you for enjoying this one.  It's good to see you.


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Martie
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7 posted 2001-04-07 07:33 PM


Michael--Just bringing this back up so more can read it...it has such a wonderful message.
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8 posted 2001-04-07 07:44 PM


Michael~
What a compelling read ...
so much compassion in it's content.

To set upon the day a promise of embrace ...
this is a very, very good thing.
Enjoyed and thanks to Martie for cranking it back to the top !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-04-07 08:00 PM


Yes, I embrace the day, oh thank you so much for this one. Thank you!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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