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SEA
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0 posted 2001-04-06 03:59 PM


When the night sighs
And whispers call
Intimate lace, off shoulder falls
Tempting you to
Investigate with touch
Negotiating curves with the
Gentlest of fingertips

Fragrance…..ever so subtle
Obliterates all thought
Recklessly toying with your senses


Requiring focus
On skin………
Moans of pleasure
Amplify with kisses
Needing more……yet
Careful not to rush…..
Ecstasy will come soon enough……
~SEA~


© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2001-04-06 04:07 PM


May the gentlest touch come to you soon. Very beautiful piece SEA  
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2 posted 2001-04-06 04:19 PM


Oh yes. You really know what you're doing here... and you know how to write too *S*...I'm definitely being inspired now. As to what, I won't say.
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3 posted 2001-04-06 04:23 PM


mmmmmmm very nice Sea---
and yeppers...its Friday again ...
me thinks its gonna be a nicey spicy weekend LOL ...
and just like I said last week...
me thinks Sea is gonna disappear for the weekend too
very expressive and sensual...sexy stuff  

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4 posted 2001-04-06 04:42 PM


Brad~ thank you  

PK~ oh please.....tell  

Janet~ ahhh yes, and of course, I'm listening to Prince   it's a stormy night.....

~SEA

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5 posted 2001-04-06 04:45 PM


Have you been hanging out with Sharon?-- Your poetry is getting very erotic lately...lol  ( not that I mind   )

well done SEA.

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6 posted 2001-04-06 04:52 PM


SEA. It doesn't sound like you're 'waiting' for romance on this one.  Nice acrostic. Panne
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7 posted 2001-04-06 05:03 PM


Very nicely done, SEA.... I think your weekend will be a GREAT one! *G*
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8 posted 2001-04-06 05:25 PM


very nice piece Sea....loved reading it.

((hugs))
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9 posted 2001-04-06 05:57 PM


Oh beautiful SEA
Nothing compares to thy beauty

Would that
I could fly the faster
Never wasting one tick of time
Going by
So quickly

Onward I press
Forward to our union

Anticipating

Drawn by thy turn
Of phrase
Verily I am
Ever thine

Robust passion
Overwhelms
My senses
And speeds my
Natural instincts
Clearly an inferno of desire
Envelops me

Come hither as
Only I can
Make thee tremble
Eternally with my
Seduction

Take my body
Only to please

Yes, thee who awaits
Oh vessel of passion
Unfulfilled

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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10 posted 2001-04-06 06:07 PM


Jamie~ Is Sharon naughty too?   Erotic.....now there's a word I like  

Panne~ just waiting till this evening   thanks

Suthern~ thank you, I hope it is  

Charisma~ thank you!!  

Interloper~ you made me sigh,and gave me such a wicked smile.....you are so  awesome! Thank you for that fantastic acrostic......

~SEA

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11 posted 2001-04-06 07:15 PM


Smles...sighs... this was a well penned acrostic  and yes, wonderfully erotic Yo go gurl!

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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12 posted 2001-04-06 08:21 PM


Sea, I loved it, You are defintely into someone or should I say something, Best of wishes girl. Keep em coming and please do tell all whats up
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13 posted 2001-04-06 08:55 PM



Awesome acrostic, beautifully and sensually expressed, bravo! Into my library this goes~

Take care,
Melissa~

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14 posted 2001-04-06 08:59 PM


very nice..I love acrostics *s

~Wynter

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15 posted 2001-04-06 09:04 PM


wow. . .

um SEA, you know. . . we've got lots of tables over in Adult. . .  

perhaps I'll hold one for you???

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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16 posted 2001-04-06 11:58 PM


Wonderfully seductive, SEA.  Much enjoyed!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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17 posted 2001-04-07 01:32 AM


I hope you get your lace and whispers Sea.
Very nicely done! Two thumbs up

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18 posted 2001-04-07 01:56 AM


OMG SEA, you are such a tease. I hate you.  
this was just to sensual. I really hate married women, like you teasing us single guys.  

I need a cold shower.

Parker

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19 posted 2001-04-07 06:51 AM


This read so smoothly, I wouldn't have noticed it was an acrostic.
WEll done
Liz

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20 posted 2001-04-07 10:45 AM


Koko~ thank you very much....I had fun with this  

DN~ thank you.....

Melissa~   thank you!

Wynter~ I do too...thank you  

Sven~ I told you....I'm too shy for that......

LW~ thank you sweetie  

Writer~ Welcome and thank you....and yes, I did  

Parker~ hey handsome.....you hate me? That hurt....that really hurt...... and here I put that lace on just for you  

Elizabeth~ thank you so much  


~SEA

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21 posted 2001-04-08 10:21 AM


So, I really don't have to wait anymore?
But the again neither do you......
Bernie
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22 posted 2001-04-08 01:45 PM


SEA~
This flowed so beautifully ...
a perfect acrostic ...
~*Marge*~

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23 posted 2001-04-08 05:02 PM


See how much of a tease you are... you need to be spanked.  

Parker

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24 posted 2001-04-09 09:15 AM


Bernie~  

Marge~  thank you!!  

Parker~ Bring it on baby  

~SEA

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