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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-06 03:57 PM




Lithesome ladies lounge
Levitating lovesongs lilt
Loving languidly




© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-04-06 04:01 PM


I swear, I wish I could do this like you do!   Awesome!!    SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-06 04:19 PM



Wonderful alliteration within this, excellent, my friend!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Destiny Nicole
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3 posted 2001-04-06 08:25 PM


Excellent work! Very inspiring to those who don't exactly know how to use words like these. Thank you I liked it.


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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-04-06 10:40 PM


My turn again...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
pretty perigrines
petite, peripatetics
purveying poems
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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5 posted 2001-04-06 10:42 PM


You sure do have a talent for these, Sunshine!!  Very nice.  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2001-04-06 10:49 PM


lovely little lament, lithesome lady  
Wilfred Yeats
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7 posted 2001-04-07 12:24 PM


I think I'll just say "Mmmmm"
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8 posted 2001-04-07 03:02 PM


Karilea~
Just too lovely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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