navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #13 » Soulmate of my dreams
Open Poetry #13
Post A Reply Post New Topic Soulmate of my dreams Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Brad Majors
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-04-06 10:52 AM



With a poetical smile
you stole my heart
and now my life
will never be the same.

With sultry text
you caress my soul
through the dark
and lonely night
melting the sadness
far away

Our love is far beyond
romantic definition
for you are the soulmate
of dreams

You are the princess
who holds the keys
to my heart
for all eternity

Even if dreams
are all we can ever hope
to be
then may we sleep forever
so you can always be with me.

© Copyright 2001 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-04-06 10:53 AM


Ah Brad....
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-04-06 11:31 AM



Our love is far beyond
romantic definition


a wonderful 2 lines, Brad

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2001-04-06 11:36 AM


Very romantic,

if we can only meet in dreams, may we sleep forever...

paraphrase of your wonderful idea

truly enjoyed reading your heart

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
4 posted 2001-04-06 11:51 AM


......and today you give me this gem to tuck away into my heart...as well as my library    SEA
PoeticaL
Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 50

5 posted 2001-04-06 11:52 AM


awwwwwwwwwwwww Brad......... You're the best darkness I have ever known.  The best.

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

Brad Majors
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647
Georgia
6 posted 2001-04-06 12:01 PM


Thank you.   Smiles at poeticaL and goes to sleep
kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
7 posted 2001-04-06 01:01 PM


ohhh This is so romantic. Looking forward to reading more
Brad Majors
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647
Georgia
8 posted 2001-04-06 01:47 PM


Thank you!
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
9 posted 2001-04-06 07:04 PM


even if dreams are all we can ever hope to be,then may we sleep forever,
I loved this line.

doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
10 posted 2001-04-06 07:09 PM


oh man oh man oh man oh man!!!
***whew***
[wiping sweat from brow]

... you tell her, darkone.... how wonderful you write!!! what a special blissful gift....


Brad Majors
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647
Georgia
11 posted 2001-04-06 07:14 PM


Thank you I'm sure she liked it very much  
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #13 » Soulmate of my dreams

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary