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Rambling in Fear
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Rambling in Fear |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Rambling Fear the touch still lingers on my mind a softness caressing me soothing me, tempering the fears held within it is the winter of my heart no pretentions, just the blue of my moon knowing that only once does this appear in a lifetime a rainbow in my days, starlight in my nights to colour my world in brightness a world dimmed by hurt, loss and worse, fear of it repeating my blanket, a symbol, as I cover myself in comfort wanting to retire from life and thoughts, wanting to stop them as spring begins it's season of life I am adrift in those thoughts that flow through my mind pausing me, holding me back from the love I wish to share surrounding myself in a wall of fear, desiring you, those unknown experiences yet regret comes to me in bound packages, unwrapped dreams, that could have been I brace myself against the cold, the inevitable... pulling my comfort tighter around me building my wall higher, blocking the sunshine, the rainbow after the storm and at the days end, even the blue of the moon has ceased to be. ~Wynter (Once in a...Blue Moon) "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This one gathered energy and power as it went until the ending just blew me away. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Simply amazing !  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, If you fight like you write I have no worries about you. *L* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Poetic Knight, thank you. For a little background...I have called myself Once in a ...Blue Moon as another name when Moonchild and is my Website name...not a good morning as you can tell And to the others, Brad thank you for reading and responding, I appreciate it. Seymour, I am not so sure I am a fighter anymore...that tunnel just keeps getting longer and longer and that light dimmer and dimmer, Thank you for your nice comments *s Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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