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Packratmike
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0 posted 2001-04-06 04:18 AM


O.K.....this is the answer to my own challenge.


my love
is like chunky
peanut butter sticking
to the roof of my mouth, waiting
got milk?

"HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike

© Copyright 2001 Mike Powers - All Rights Reserved
Packratmike
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1 posted 2001-04-06 04:20 AM


I will be gone for a few days.....cya all later.

Packratmike

Panne447
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2 posted 2001-04-06 12:49 PM


Mike, You won't believe this but I came in because your title found me with a mouth of p/butter sticking to my roof and an orange sunkist didn't do it... am off for that milk now - oh - cool cinquain... Panne
Sven
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3 posted 2001-04-06 09:21 PM


oh my. . .

LOL    

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Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-04-06 11:51 PM


This is exactly why I stay away from peanut butter!!!!      LOL.  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

mariee66
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5 posted 2001-04-07 01:04 AM


Pretty amusing  

Cute write!

Packratmike
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6 posted 2001-04-09 02:26 AM


I'm back.....thank you all for the comments.  Peanut butter rules!!!!

Mike

kaile
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7 posted 2001-04-24 11:14 AM


Of course! cool cinquain
Packratmike
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8 posted 2001-04-24 12:47 PM


Thank you faterider...glad you liked this tongue in cheek poem.*S*

Mike

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