just a jaded bit of fringe

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-04-06 01:38 AM

No.
It doesn't
take that much.
Just the promise
of your touch.
Yes.
I am in stand
surprised
to see a mirror
in your eyes.
(maybe)
there's no
compromise
shades of gray--
fray realized,
with just a jaded
bit of fringe--
curtained thighs
to hide the singe...

and all my thought
is therein hell.
echo--
of the empty yell
down the trap
wherein I dwell
In chains of pain--
reverse of spell.

May every waver
of my voice--
each drop of tear
in my eye's moist
and from your need
to feel rejoice--
Quite real in my denial's hell.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

1 posted 2001-04-06 02:00 AM

Serenity, this is a powerful piece of writing sweetie...
My goodness, I find myself wanting to re-read your poem twice over before coming here in replybox and then when I do get here, oh boy, I'm stuck on finding the right words to convey to you just how much your poetry innocently captivates this reader...

hugs2u

~coco~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2001-04-06 02:26 AM

and all my thought
is therein hell.
echo--
of the empty yell
down the trap
wherein I dwell
In chains of pain--
reverse of spell.

Oh I love these lines Hon
A very powerful, very deep poem.

hugs

Maree

Love which is not always springing is always dying.

Kalil Gibran

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2001-04-06 03:21 AM

Exquisite poetry, O serene One....

Thanks for the read...

Regards,
Sudhir

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-04-06 02:41 PM

Yes.
I am in stand
surprised
to see a mirror
in your eyes.
==================
fray realized,
with just a jaded
bit of fringe--
curtained thighs
to hide the singe...

and all my thought
is therein hell.
echo--
of the empty yell
===================

May every waver
of my voice--
each drop of tear
in my eye's moist
and from your need
to feel rejoice--
Quite real in my denial's hell.
=============================
welcome to me world.

"Just the promise
of your touch."

"and from your need
to feel rejoice"

mirror mirror on me wall ...

It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me
As if you know how it feels to never be who you wanted to be
~jackson browne~

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2001-04-06 02:46 PM

Ya gotta know just how hard this one hits right now...yeah yeah yeah I know you told me so...but...

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

6 posted 2001-04-07 08:13 PM

~Where do I begin, how do I pick, what do I say? Mm, well K, I think I've told you before that I need you to print your writings on 5x7 sheets and bind them together to make me a little book, you know, to carry around in my backpack for all those little moments in my day that I want to read something just totally cool. Your words. I enjoy you. *Peace.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-04-07 09:05 PM

Powerful, clever, and hits home for me!~

Take care,
Melissa~

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

8 posted 2001-04-07 09:11 PM

quote:
and all my thought
is therein hell.
echo--
of the empty yell
down the trap
wherein I dwell
In chains of pain--
reverse of spell.

..... you made me cry....... loveya harpo

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

9 posted 2001-04-07 09:17 PM

i got chills... no foolin.
"curtained thighs
to hide the singe"

i know this.....

well woven words, as always.

You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass.
- Frank Sinatra

"For a dreamer, night's the only time of day"

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2001-04-07 09:24 PM

How.....do you do this?

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-04-07 10:35 PM

Astounding, Serenity. You always leave me in awe of your talent.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

12 posted 2001-04-07 11:38 PM

You're in perfect form, Serenity

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