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Krawdad
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0 posted 2001-04-06 01:20 AM



1 Lady in the Surf


1 Lady in the surf, she stood
returned to land, said she could

While surf we know can cleanse the sand
this must you do hand in hand

Hear too advice, this from a friend
Maintain Your Self until the end

and from a distant shore we say
best of luck, be on your way.
                              
                            
                            
Krawdad
4.6.01

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Georgia
1 posted 2001-04-06 10:24 AM


Nice!
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2 posted 2001-04-07 01:07 PM


Krawdad~ this is wonderful!    SEA
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e......ty .....i am so touched.....it is beautiful.....helen
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