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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Some Things Remain .. ~*Marge Tindal*~ He said his name was Bill. And like all the bills I've ever known, my malebox overflowed with LATE NOTICE of him. He was always PAST DUE, 30 Days Late, wanting PAYMENT ON DEMAND with Late Charges tacked on I've no interest at all ... Service has been disconnected ... ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Clever and fun. Brought a smile to my face. Pen on! "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Miss Marge, this is awfully cute!  Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julian~ Just a phunny little midnight write.  Claire~ I like knowing I can give you gals a giggle in the midnight hour ! *Thanks ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Marge, my name is Mike! I work best when you put your hands on me and pull me close to you. I will echo everything you say. Your volume will depend on how close I get to you and you can be sure that if you put me very close to your lips, your joy will be heard for great distances!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~  Is this the party to whom I'm speaking ? LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes, sometimes it gets lonely that any BILL will do. This was fun. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ Well ... ain't never been THAT lonely ! LOL ! Just a silly little midnight filler ! My kitchen cabinet muses are having great folly ! Thanks for enjoying my silliness. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nightie-night oh clever one! You know now that you mention it - you even sound like Ernestine LOL Oh, I needed a laugh! Tah, tah! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah funny indeed ... Marge, you shine as always with such wonderful works... regards, sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge, you brings this one so funny, wishes that bills could be funny too, but well you describe them very well.....no fun at all. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... a wonderful read Marge! Just what I needed to begin this day with a smile. Clever and unique just as you are, loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Very fun one Marge SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cleverly punned! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, This is a pun of fun. Enjoyed the read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Enjoyed the whole thread~~~~~ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I enjoyed, very cool! AP |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So clever, Marge, I like, I like!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very cunning and clever Marge....you have a wonderful sense of humor too....loved the write and thanks for sharing!!! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Hey ... that Ernestine was one cool operator ! Thanks ! Sudhir~ Just a goofy little spoofy ! Thanks for enjoying. Charisma~ Tee-Hee ! Bills are just like that ... they keep the malebox cluttered ! Kit~ Glad to tickle your funny bone ! You should see what I do to Fred's ! SEA~ Tickled you like. Karilea~ Yah ! Phretty, phunny, hunny ! Seymour~ Glad to catch you in a giggle. Wynter~ *smiling* here too ! AgustP~ I like cool ! Denise~ Me glad .. Nate, my friend~ On you ... a smile looks good ! Thanks for enjoying my silly self. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, zoomed in here on a wing and a prayer, saw this and I love it, don't I always. You Ms Margie are soooooo creative you could make the drug charts sparkle with wit. Love it LOVE IT Absolutely delightful Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Thank ya' for popping in ! MARSHA ~ I love it when I see you've slipped through the tunnel and treated me with your smile. Now ... I'm sure there's a Dr. Bill or two on staff to be reckoned with ! Love, you take care and I've left the light on for your safe return ! LOL @ drug charts ! ! Love n' hugs aplenty ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Hi Marge, I can always count on you to come up with something different! Too cool my friend. Hugs, Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Hey there, girlfriend ! Just tickled to see you out in Open ! I pop into Spiritual every now and again to get a gander at you ! Delighted to see you here. Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OH MY GAWD ! Did I write this ???? Well ... it was a FULL six months BEFORE I reunited with a high school friend and fell totally in love .... Oh .... his name ..........LOL .... yep !  Bill~ Think there's a 're-connect' fee ??? Now STOP THAT LAUGHING !!  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge-- You deserve just what you got! Very funny, honey. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very cute, Marge! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: And just how does the real live Bill feel about all this? Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ I sure like my Bill's daily~ SuzieQ~ Tee-Hee-Hee ... who would have thought I'd get Billed~ BettyLou~ Well ... I think he likes knowing I paid the 'reconnect' fee~  Thanks you guys ... this was just too ironic~ Me happy !!!  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Hmmmmm... perhaps I should write a cute poem about rags and toes... and then just settle back to wait for bliss? LOL If I thought that would work, I'd be posting non-stop! LOL Isn't there an expression about being hoist by your own petard? LOL This is great, Marge... and I'm so happy you have Bill... now make him help with the bills! *G* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Yep, you're stuck with all of them my dear Now pay attention and don't mess them up 'Not interested?' don't say that to the wrong one you hear!!! LOL, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Marge This was such a clever piece of writing that left me with a smile. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe! You're too much! |
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