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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2001-04-05 11:03 PM

Would you mind if I borrowed your pen,
So I may pretend ,to write with a glow,
Make my words dazzle your eye,
Make my words flow with surprise,
May I borrow your heart ,never depart,
Just for the night, Let my poem be with life,
Take you on a whirlwind magical flight,
drop you nice and soft,
Upon the oceans of mermaids,
That send us the signals of poetry delights,
May I borrow your ink, that marks so unique,
Upon the window of my very soul,
If I could write with a spark,
I would create the colors of the rainbow,
a promise of tomorrow,
A world born anew,
With so much beauty bestowed
With just the touch of your pen,
For yet a momentary delight.
Yellow's of bright,
White pure delight,
purple lavenders dream,
blue with surpise,
black in surmise,
With just the mark of your pen.

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 04-06-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-05 11:38 PM

This is lovely, yes, you may borrow my pen!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-04-05 11:50 PM

This is a very pretty and colorful poem. Yes...you may borrow my pen anytime. But it only writes in black. I do have some pencils you may use anytime.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-06 12:15 PM

Loved the analogy of color. And yes, you may have my pen...please, perhaps then you could coax another sunset, sunrise or walk along a river, beach or lake from its lodging behind the scrub grasses trying fitfully to bloom.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-04-06 02:09 AM

Ya know, I think your pen works pretty well.
Could we trade maybe?

/:-}==
=#===

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2001-04-06 02:16 AM

Rosebud, ya know what sweetie, Krawdad beat me to the punch

that's exactly what I intended on saying, oh well I ditto what PoetFriend Krawdad has stated...
coco

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

6 posted 2001-04-06 08:45 AM

Irish Rose Thank you so much, sometimes I'm in such awe of everyone's poetry, thinking if only I could create some images, so just with a stroke of your pen, I'm honored,
Alan, gee whiz I'll gladly take pencils too, In fact that may spread my horizon even more
Julian, wow you've already got me thinking about the beautiful sunsets, each day beckons us into a new color,
.krawdad, I'm very appreciative of your compliment, put a

on my face for sure.
Coco, thank you so much, I really appreciate the compliment

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

7 posted 2001-04-06 09:38 AM

Such an amazing word Painting you have given to us

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2001-04-06 04:19 PM

Brad, thank you so much, I do love to paint!

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2001-04-07 01:41 AM

Rosebud,

This is pretty and delightful. I think I need to borrow "your" pen.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

10 posted 2001-04-07 01:45 AM

Such a cheerful little poem. Joyce

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

11 posted 2001-04-07 06:21 PM

Michael thank you so much, I must warn you my pen has many different colors, and many different strokes, but pen away,
Joyce thank you so much

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