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Destiny Nicole
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since 2001-04-04
Posts 19
USA

0 posted 2001-04-05 05:05 PM


ME

You say
you understand
how things are going

But, I don't believe
you do

You see
life has always
been perfectly fine
for you

Things haven't
fallen apart
right before your eyes

True,
they do go pretty
good at time

But,
just when everything
begins to go well,

Something happens
all my hopes and dreams
begin to
fail

True,
my life is complicated,
but I hope
that you can see that

This is My Life
This is ME


© Copyright 2001 Destiny Nicole - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-04-05 05:08 PM


Destiny Nicole~ Welcome!! This is great.....will be on the look out for more from you    SEA
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-05 05:14 PM


Destiny, Welcome to Passions!  Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-04-05 05:21 PM


Welcome!  You will love it here.

Nice write.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
4 posted 2001-04-05 05:30 PM



  Destiny Nicole!

A great first post from your heart~

Take care,
Melissa~

Brad Majors
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since 2001-04-03
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Georgia
5 posted 2001-04-05 05:38 PM


Beautiful piece, I'll be looking for more from you! Welcome!
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
6 posted 2001-04-05 05:48 PM


Ohh, i like this one:-~

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
7 posted 2001-04-05 05:48 PM


Welcome to a little part of paradise. We may not always understand but we will be here to let you be YOU!
I enjoyed your first poem.

Destiny Nicole
Junior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 19
USA
8 posted 2001-04-05 06:46 PM


Destiny,

It's so good to see you posting here.  Welcome to the family.  I enjoyed this poem much, my friend.  It's written well.  

((((hugs))))
Michael


elizabeth anne
Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 83

9 posted 2001-04-05 10:56 PM


Welcome to Passions...you are welcome here. Very nice first write!

Elizabeth Anne

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
10 posted 2001-04-06 12:47 PM


Welome! Pen on, though we may not always understand, we shall read.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
11 posted 2001-04-06 08:57 AM


welcome, sometimes we just got to be who we are, each of us have a very special uniqueness about us.
Destiny Nicole
Junior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 19
USA
12 posted 2001-06-12 11:10 PM


Thank you all for your kindness I really enjoy it here it is truely relaxing and just a place to get away from the real world as we all know it.
redwinggj
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since 2001-07-22
Posts 4
Wyandotte, MI
13 posted 2001-07-22 12:45 PM


This is my first time here and I am glad I found your work.  This was really nice, and spoke directly to me.  
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