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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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For you I will gift you smiles Wrapped in winsome, comely style It will light your eyes Pleasure in a touch Soothes and calms, steadies your smile As you gift it back What a sharing pair To light your eyes, lighting mine Transcending all time Kiss the wind, my love Breeze my cheek with your delights Smiling through the night |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely romantic thoughts, my friend.  All writing comes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Breeze my cheek with your delights." James |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'm reminded of Fitzgerald (the other one - F. Scott - rather Edmond) your poems here make me think of "a loaf of bread, a jug of wine..." I hope this gives you some idea of how much I'm pleased and impressed to read them |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very nicely written |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A lovely, hopeful and soothing poem, Karilea Take care, Melissa~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very soft and beautiful! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Delicate, precious thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Fantastic!!!  ~SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I will gift you smiles ... As you gift it back ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Wonderful. Superb. You've done it again. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Smiling over here sunshine *S* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, you have become quite the romantic...dreamy stuff... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely, Lovely, Lovely Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi there sunshiny girl it's me tracie ~HUGS~ Beautiful writings as always sweetie, missed your lovely musings....well done winged ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooo lovely, Karilea!! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Kewl, what is given should also be returned... Bernie A smile a day keeps the world 'g.Bernie Slicker |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For all of the poets that left a note....thank you... for "being" you! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a sharing pair To light your eyes, lighting mine Transcending all time Oh......I loved those lines, just loved them, and think how lucky the people are to know you Sunshine; you are a treasure. Lovely poem. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunshine, this was a delight to read... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"Sunshine on a cloudy day" |
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