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Alan
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0 posted 2001-04-05 02:24 PM



Do not love me in just the night
But love me by the light of day
If our love is true, it can live in the light

If your words are true and your heart is right
Your love of me will not decay
Do not love me in just the night

I promise to stand beside you until our lives twilight
Our love will keep the wolves at bay
If our love is true, it can live in the light

The love we share will bring us great delight
My love for you will never let me be led astray
Do not love me in just the night

Our dreams and fantasies will forever be in sight
A bed of roses will be our daily bouquet
If our love is true, it can live in the light

My love of you, your love will incite
I will love you forever and a day
Do not love me in just the night
If our love is true, it can live in the light

© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-04-05 02:35 PM


Alan, Oh, yes she should love you in the light of day!  Hope your love is strong enough for both of you.  Hugs,  ME
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-04-05 02:37 PM


I like when it lasts from night and INTO the day!  

Lovely work Alan! Sounds like a good thing to me!

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-04-05 02:38 PM


True, true....nothing like a little afternoon delight {~,^}
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2001-04-05 02:41 PM


Beautiful writing....nice flow and rhymes schemes...I loved that bouquet line...brilliant piece!

Nathan

PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31
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5 posted 2001-04-05 11:12 PM


yep I always leave the lights on... ;-)

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

Rosebud1229
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6 posted 2001-04-05 11:14 PM


awesome, I love this, and it's so true.
Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-04-05 11:37 PM


Yes, if someone cannot acknowledge me openly, forget it.  Thanks for a great read.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Alan
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right next door
8 posted 2001-04-05 11:53 PM


I want to thank each and everyone of you for your kind comments. This is my first one here in a long time. I see now why I had to come back.
Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
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9 posted 2001-04-06 01:04 AM


Alan, This is very good! I liked it a lot.
You want love in the light,
I want love at night.
If we were together,
we'd have no time to fight!  

Kitty

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

[This message has been edited by Kitty** (edited 04-06-2001).]

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
10 posted 2001-04-06 08:44 AM


Very nice Alan. Love should be a 24 hr thing. Let  the cover of night fill you with pleasent dreams and the openess of the day fill your hearts with laughter.
Paula Finn
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missouri
11 posted 2001-04-06 01:25 PM


Alan...I'm so glad you posted this...you have said exactly how I feel...love me openly for all to see...thank you

"If you are going to walk on thin ice, you might as well dance!"
-Anonymous

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