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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-05 01:34 PM


The caress, light touch,
Fingers exploring softly.
Secret pleasure found



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.



[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-05-2001).]

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VAS
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1 posted 2001-04-05 01:38 PM


oooh, gently sensual

well done!

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-05 02:45 PM


skin silken to touch
love this feeling very much
now, please, touch me....here....

Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-04-05 03:40 PM



OHHHH, very erotic and sensual, indeed, beautifully written!

Take care,
Melissa~

Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-04-05 03:52 PM


I agree, very sensual write!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2001-04-05 04:37 PM


yipe!!! hey interloper i got season passes to six flags if you ever wanna go o yuh
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with you
6 posted 2001-04-05 04:48 PM



with seeking, hot hands
hidden passion stirred in me
please touch me again



I'm liking these!

~SEA



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7 posted 2001-04-24 11:09 AM


well, i was intrigued by the title..

was not disappointed

BrightStar
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8 posted 2001-04-25 11:16 AM


Nice title, nice senryu.
Nate Dogg
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9 posted 2001-04-25 11:19 AM


Very sexy....good job!!

Nathan

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10 posted 2001-04-26 10:52 AM


wow

[This message has been edited by BrightStar (edited 04-26-2001).]

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
11 posted 2001-04-26 10:56 AM


VAS ~ Thank you.

Sunshine ~ Whew! and I thought I'd written something sensual ...

Melissa ~ *sigh*

Lone Wolf ~ and *sigh* again.

Walt ~ Email 'em to me.  They got dark tunnels there for me and my accompanying sweety  

SEA ~ Between you and Sunshine I get enough showers that I ought to buy stock in my soap manufacturer  

Faterider ~ Good.

BrightStar ~ Thank you.

Nate ~ I tried     Thanx

BrightStar ~ Thanx again, I think

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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