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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-05 01:07 PM



~*~
Seedlings planted
with love and hope
grow into buds, anon.
Beautiful rose coming to bloom
And loved.
~*~
Full bloomed,
The rose blossomed
Being loved all the more.
Love is not really quenched by time,
It grows.
~*~
Wither,
Terrible word,
Not understood by most.
Defined as dying, with decay
Not true
~*~
Aging,
Passage of time,
Existence, mature growth
Going home to the renewal,
rebirth.
~*~
Still loved
And remembered
For their existence here.
Evidence of a fruitful life’s  
Passage.




Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-05-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-04-05 01:13 PM


BEAUTIFULLY done!!    SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-05 01:14 PM


ah...sounds like you are an astute observer of nature...I loved the comparison here!  
Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-04-05 02:49 PM


Ah, Sir....much, much better than my offering....

a beauty, indeed....

wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2001-04-05 03:53 PM


greatly ended and enjoyed throughout
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5 posted 2001-04-05 04:05 PM


Aging,
Passage of time,
Existence, mature growth
Going home to the renewal,
rebirth.
~*~
Still loved
And remembered
For their existence here.
Evidence of a fruitful life’s  
Passage.
====================

nice to see your name here again...
very cool write of the cycle of life and the season's renewels ...
great imagery as well.

It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me
As if you know how it feels to never be who you wanted to be
~jackson browne~

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-04-05 05:17 PM


SEA ~ Thanx  

serenity ~ I don't know about astute    Thanks for the compliment.  I'm honored.

Sunshine ~ You honor me above my abilities.  Thank you  

wayoutwalt ~ Thanx for the read.

JanetMarie ~ Thanx for the welcome back and the understanding read.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Rosebud1229
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7 posted 2001-04-06 09:18 AM


as the passage of time, your so right love should blossom more and more.
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