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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-05 11:46 AM

reach, to touch, don’t pluck,
bend, to smell, fragrance sublime
stroke softly her skin

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-04-05 11:48 AM

Oh my! Beautiful senryu! Wonderful image to match~

Take care,
Melissa~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-04-05 12:13 PM

ditto Melissa

couldn't help but think of the thorns, though, keep catching them while gardening near...ought to be more careful so I can take in just the beauty, eh?

Well done!

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-04-05 12:14 PM

sunshine,

aw yes, this
is beautiful

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-05 12:18 PM

Stunning graphic to compliment such sweet words of wisdom. Well said.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-04-05 01:24 PM

Well, great minds work along the same scalar. I just penned something on a Rose before I read this wonderful piece.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

6 posted 2001-04-05 01:44 PM

ok - no plucking - (difficult - not impossible)
but restraint - not sure I could accomplish that !

Loved this

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2001-04-24 11:04 AM

like VAS, i cant help thinking about those thorns too....

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

8 posted 2001-04-25 03:15 PM

moonbeam touches rose
no ability to smell
caressing her skin

Moonstruck

Kay
Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 70

9 posted 2001-04-25 04:04 PM

I enjoyed this so much!

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

10 posted 2001-04-25 04:04 PM

purrrrrrr

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

11 posted 2001-04-27 09:45 PM

This is soooooo beautiful, Karilea! Lovely!

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