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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-04-05 06:41 AM


Kisses Are Not Always Forever

I'll never tell anyone how much I miss
the beautiful and lovely Michelle.
So what if I miss holding her tight
and kissing her goodnight.
She still has a right
to her own life.
And she would certainly know
if she wanted to see me whenever.
And if she did I wouldn't be missing her
because we would still be together.
And now it doesn't seem right
for me to desire to kiss her goodnight
while she tends to believe
our kisses were never quite right.
Sometimes kisses are just a brief
romantic endeavor.
Kisses are not always forever.
Goodnight.
LOL.

Jameslee@April04,2001

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-04-05 08:57 AM


No James, sadly, kisses are not forever......at least not all of them....then there are those that linger over years.....the ones that you can't stop feeling.....no matter what you do.    SEA
Severn
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2 posted 2001-04-05 09:06 AM


Yep - some of these last and last like Sea says...

good poem here...

K

All obscurity starts with a danger:
Your dangers are many. I
Cannot look much but your form suffers
Some strange injury
Sylvia Plath

kitkat
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3 posted 2001-04-05 09:46 AM


I too, have to agree with Sea. It is sad  fact....but those that linger *sighs*
Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 2001-04-05 10:28 AM


They may not be forever...but the touch of them goes on and on...excellent writing
JamesMichael~

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-04-05 11:20 AM


SBJ .. this is a reads very sincere and with out bitterness...
and even though you put lol after it...
I think it was intended as sweet confession.
a very tender render is how I read it.
Your heart always shines in your words.

It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me
As if you know how it feels to never be who you wanted to be
~jackson browne~

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-04-05 11:22 AM


Very true, James.  But the memories go on forever and ever.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27
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viginia
7 posted 2001-04-05 11:27 AM


It's strange the way a single kiss can have suh an impact on a person's mind and heart.  Beautiful writing...

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Jill
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8 posted 2001-04-05 11:33 AM


James, this is so sad....I hope you soon find someone willing to give you what you deserve.....kisses that will last forever.
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-04-05 03:38 PM


Thank you Sea, Severn, Kitkat, Butterflies, Janet, Lone, banbury and Jill for your nice responses.
I had hope for her kisses, then the kisses began, then the kisses ended, and then all I had was hope again, and now I must let go of the hope and embrace memories...because kisses are not always forever...in this case I had sincerely hoped they were...James

wayoutwalt
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10 posted 2001-04-05 03:49 PM


pretty awesome
i knew a michelle boy did she ever get me in trubble dubble


Nate Dogg
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11 posted 2001-04-06 12:06 PM


I agree James....a wonderful, heartfelt write!

Nathan

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