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Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

0 posted 2001-04-04 09:24 PM

Just one more time
Let me gaze upon your face
Pull you into a tight embrace
And never let you go

Just one more time
Let me cry tear drops
On your shoulder
And listen to your heart
Just one more time
Before the needle
Takes your breath away
Let me feel the breath
Come from your lips

Before I hold you
In a tight embrace
Let me hear a bark
From deep within

Just one more time
Before you die
Let me be the one
To feed you hot dogs

Just one more time
Before the last
Let me whisper
"Thank you for the good times."

For the last time
Let me cry teardrops on your shoulder
Feel the breath leave your body
To never again return
Know that I loved you

And never wanted it
To come down to
Just one more time

To Wuss and Zip: you may have died but you will live forever in my heart

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-04-04 10:15 PM

Cuddlez~
Awwwww !
So tenderly done.
My how we love our pets.
Thank you for sharing this piece of your heart.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

2 posted 2001-04-05 05:44 PM

Thanks,.

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-04-06 06:28 PM

I passed this poem several times cause I knew just by the title what would happen. Finally had to open and read. Yep, tears are now running down my cheeks.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-04-06 06:38 PM

Thank you for this piece. It may give us all peace.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2001-04-07 01:46 PM

I wonder if they know the love lasts forever? As does the missing... tears here.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-04-07 02:13 PM

enjoy

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2001-04-09 09:04 PM

Cuddlez, this has gotten me all choked up...beautiful tribute! Wonderfully written!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

8 posted 2001-04-09 10:40 PM

I so much know what you felt. I recently had to lay my dog of 13 years to rest also.
My tears I shed for me I now shed for you. {{hugs}}

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

9 posted 2001-04-19 08:13 PM

Thanks-
I think they knew love lasts forever. I mean animals are so much smarter than a lot of people give them credit for:-). Thanks for the replies!
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"You act like its a bad thing. Actually its a nice thing to do. You gave me wing to fly from the pain and then there's all the good memories that keep me grounded in your memories"

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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