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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-04-04 08:08 PM



Promise me that,
you won't let me slip away.
Locked in your arms I lie,
that's where I want to be.
In this world of craziness,
only in you,
I believe.
Even lies,
I will believe.
In your arms,
I want to live.
Don't worry about past tears,
all my fears have disappeared.
All my hapiness is here,
I just want to be with you.
And in this moment of glory,
there is no need to say,
you're sorry.
I delight in your clean kisses,
just let the waters run deeply.
That is all I need to feel,
and with it I take my fill,
after starving for attention.
For this once,
let our triumph in a pedestal,
stand.

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with you
1 posted 2001-04-05 09:44 AM


this is great! I understand the feel of this    SEA
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-04-05 05:42 PM


Only two reads?!?  Ridiculous.  Back to the top for you.

Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


inot2B
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3 posted 2001-04-05 05:51 PM


Yes this is exactly how I feel with my man.

"All my hapiness is here,
I just want to be with you."

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