Gilven's Pledge. . . from "The Accolade"

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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-04-04 08:01 PM

Kellelynn to thee this day I make this promise,
this pledge of my heart of hearts
today, I am before thee again
to receive from thee the Accolade of a Knight
now do I pledge my love for thee
and ask if thou wouldst be mine for all time

since that day so long ago when I first beheld thee
I have always held thee close to mine heart
my dreams were filled with the brightness of thine eyes
and I longed and prayed for the day
when I would be before thee my love
no longer playmate, but Knight of thine heart
asking for thy hand to always be joined in mine
down the path of life and love

and now, fairest Kellelynn, maiden of my heart
I stand before thee, Knight and Champion, Hero and Man
pledging to thee that most sought of all treasures
mine heart
good and gentle Lady, I pray that thou wouldst
taketh mine heart and hold it close to thee
that it may warm and comfort thee all of thy days

this is the pledge I make to thee this day my love
a pledge of mine heart forever true
and now with these words, I seal the pledge
I Love Thee Kellelynn
and thus shall it always be

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-04 09:12 PM

Were these your wedding vows? A marriage made in heaven. Joyce

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-04-04 09:22 PM

Oh my!

*swooning yet again, Sir Sven!* Beautiful, romantic, perfect verse, but, I have come to expect no less of your heart

One day, my friend, she will hear these vows!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-04 09:26 PM

Wonderful pledge, Sir Gilven. What maiden could ask for more?

Excellent writing

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2001-04-05 09:07 AM

Great poem, continuing the story from the Accolade. Maybe you can keep going with this, continue the story? You the man, Sven. *S*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-04-05 09:09 AM

I behold thee in my sight, and welcome you back, Sir Knight....

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-04-05 12:50 PM

Joyce, no. . . but thank you. . .

Melissa, one can only hope. . . thank you my friend. . .

LW, I'll have to tell Gilven when I see him. . . thank you. . .

PK, an interesting idea. . . I like these two characters that I've created. . . who knows??

Sunshine, thanks to thee for thy welcome. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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