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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-04-04 07:09 PM



read my heart
it lays before you
open
honest
trusting
read my heart
the words of love
so clear
unmistakeable
read my heart
the words
bold
straightforward
uncomplicated
read my heart
read......
me

~SEA~



© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-04-04 07:10 PM



Everytime I read one of your poems, I get a glimpse into your heart and I see that it is beautiful ~hugs~  

Take care,
Melissa~

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2001-04-04 07:13 PM


I love your poetry, you are quickly becoming favorite!
Sven
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3 posted 2001-04-04 07:19 PM


I already am. . .  

this is wonderful SEA. . . we all should be read this way. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-04-04 07:20 PM


You are on a roll now.  Go, you girl!

You are an enjoyable read ... ans so is your heart.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-04-04 07:26 PM


"Open, honest and trusting."  I desire a heart such as this...James
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-04-04 07:42 PM


I loved the theme of this, SEA, very much
PoeticKnight
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7 posted 2001-04-05 09:14 AM


A very beautiful 'read' indeed.
Agust P
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8 posted 2001-04-05 09:27 AM


thanks for this beautiful poem! AP
Rosebud1229
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9 posted 2001-04-05 09:28 AM


Sea, this is by far the most important part, the heart. awesome poem
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