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Open Poetry #13

Inside/Outside (cinquain)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-04-04 12:05 PM

Inside
tears flow freely
she won't let them be seen
cover with smiles and laughter
Outside

~SEA~

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2001-04-04 12:12 PM

This is very good

reminds me a little of wordancer.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2001-04-04 12:46 PM

SEA, what is going on over there? I sense a disturbance in the force. Let me know.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-04 12:56 PM

Ah SEA, I know this moment, indeed, I do....

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

4 posted 2001-04-04 01:12 PM

within
there is turmoil
fear and hope are at war
the tears that flow are love's blood
I know

they may change the name of these to SEAquains

"Or, like the thief of fire from heaven,
Wilt thou withstand the shock?
And share with him - the unforgiven-
His vulture and his rock?"
lord byron

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-04-04 01:52 PM

Outside
words flow freely
still capturing our hearts
ebbing emotionally
tidal

Luv ya.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-04-04 02:16 PM

Brad~ Hi and welcome

thank you

PK~ The force is strong with this one......especially with the emotions.......I just need a break.....feels like I never get to stop......that's all....emotion overload....hugs and smooches

Sunshine~

I know you do.....thank you

Jamie~ I like that....

thank you...yes, love's blood....that's a good way to put it

Interloper~ Luv ya too sweetie.....thank you

~SEA

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

7 posted 2001-04-04 03:11 PM

Well if you need a laugh, I'll tell you some jedi jokes.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-04-04 04:41 PM

Oh SEA, how I have been here too. BEst of luck to you. Hope you get a break soon.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-04-04 04:49 PM

I love this form of poetry, well done!

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