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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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as I watch the sky turn from dark to grey to light of blue I can't stop myself from thoughts of you You float through my mind like the clouds up high and I hear myself wistfully sigh remembering floods my senses taking me back to now long ago wishing somehow you could know in my soul our friendship will forever reside...... this heart still misses you with love deep inside. ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-04-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This one got me, SEA. I've been there too. Very nicely done.  All writing comes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melancholy this morning, are we? Lift up those pretty eyes....dry your tears, for your friend misses you, too....but your friend is smiling at the memories.... |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
There you are SEA, hope your morning gets better. Here's a happy thought from PK...night is coming! |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
I think we have all been there SEA. Just one of those things that happens in life, when you have that friend that you so desire to be more, but just never can have, b/c you truly see how wonderful that person is in their entirety, not just with infatuation. Very good poem. J~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bob Hope sang "Thanks for the memories" and so do you. I sing, "give me more to read 'cuz you go, girl." Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Brother did this hit a nerve in me! Wonderful read this was, thank you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This made me think of a friend I lost.......... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
as I watch the sky turn from dark to grey to light of blue I can't stop myself from thoughts of you ===================== nor should you... especially when it brings on such sincere soft inspire ... sweet verses Sea-girlie thanks for the email Im trying to get caught up... ya take a couple days off and its poetry overdose. *L* It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
i liked your words very much , and lovely thoughts there. lovely poem, WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Most Wonderfully penned... regards, sudhir |
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